Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Arnav's young authors challenge 2015

I hope you like me story.

The two friends


There was a dragon named Toothless. One day he was walking along the river and he heard a noise.He stopped and started to look around for the noise.Toothless noticed something furry in the bush.He went closer and saw it was a monkey. The dragon said Hi my name is Toothless. I am a black dragon and I can shoot lightning out of  my mouth .The Monkey replied Hi my name is Pessy.I am yellow and green.Pessy and Toothless started to talk and became friends. After a while they decided to play hide and seek.Toothless said”i will hide first” Pessy agreed, Toothless asked Pessy to close his eye and count to 20 so that he can hide. Pessy closed his eye and started counting while Toothless ran to hide. Toothless hid in a cave and covered the cave with leaves and vines,it took Pessy hours to find Toothless.At last Pessy found Toothless and it was Pessys turn to hide. Toothless closed his eyes and counted one to twenty ,Pessy ran to hide, he climbed a tall tree and hid there. Toothless went to see if Pessy was in a boat but Pessy was not in a boat . Toothless spent hours looking for Pessy but couldnt find him. At last Toothless gave up and Pessy climbed down from the tree, both were very hungry as it was lunch time. They decided to eat something. Pessy said lets go and eat mango. Pessy and Toothless started to look for a mango tree ,after a long hunt, they found a mango tree full of ripe mangoes. Pessy quickly climbed the tree and picked some mangoes. Both sat under a mango tree and they ate lots of mangoes. After lunch they were very sleepy. Toothless said he is going to sleep as he is very tired. Pessy said he is tired too. Both layed down and soon they were fast asleep.When Toothless woke up. he could not find Pessy. He thought Pessy is again playing hide and seek. Toothless started to look for Pessy,he looked every where but couldnt find Pessy.It was getting late afternoon and toothlesswas getting fasturated as he couldnt find Pessy.He called him but there was no reply, Toothless was very worried because it was getting dark. Toothless called his friends to help him out.All his friends search the bush but couldnt find Pessy, Toothless saw something on the ground, it was footprints.Toothless called his friends to investigate. They all followed the footprint and  saw a big fenced. They all couldn’t believe that there is a big fence to crossover. As soon as Toothless touch the fence to cross, he got electric shock. Toothless was okay and said we are meant to jump over the fence. They all had a quick chat and decided that they have to get a ladder to cross the fence. One of the them said they have a ladder at home. One of his friends went to get a ladder from his house, but his dad willing accompanied him to rescue  Pessy. When they reach the fence,one friend hold the ladder and one after another they jumped over the fence. Toothless was very excited to see Pessy he was able to save Pessy from the cage. Toothless and Pessy was so happy to see each other and they worked back happily. And when they reach their home,they felt like there is no place like home.They had a happy ending for both.


I wanted to share this story because it took a long time to write.I had to enter a compation and it took a the people got award form a famous witter i think.The people who only entered was the people who was got awards.This story was my first longest story i have ever done in my live.It had to be 600 or 500 word's long.



2 comments:

  1. very good but toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long

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  2. Hi Arnav and Anjli,
    Anjli- your comment is inappropriate- please write a comment sandwich- thank you. Arnav- this sounds a lot like 'How to Tame Your Dragon'! It is good to post all kinds of learning here in your blog post but remember that you should be writing NEW posts each week as well. You need to write a new blog post for this week asap.
    Ms W

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