There are times in life when you feel down and out
The world against you, of that there’s no doubt.
There’s no one around and no one to care
No one to talk to and no one to share.
Your troubles seem many and on the increase
Is nobody bothered, will this thing not cease?
There’s light in the tunnel you hear people say
Hoping it’s your tunnel that there’s light in today.
But things seem to drag on just like before
Nothing changing for you, no knock at your door.
Then it just happens, it all comes together
No more the anger, at the end of your tether.
Life’s not so bad now, you’re not down anymore
Things seem so easy you see, no longer a chore.
Next time that you feel down and under the weather
Look back at this moment and pull yourself together.
the first part makes me feel like i am a person that sit's in a spot and feeling sad.The next part makes me think of there are two diffrent tunnel's and i just don't know what one to take the good one or the bad one.The next one makes me feel like i am in my home staring at the door hoping that same one will knock.And the last this story is about when you trip over don't cray for hour pull your self to gether.
i really liked it but you did not write a reflection
ReplyDeleteHi Arnav,
ReplyDeleteAnjli is right. I like this poem too. Why do you like it? What does it make you think of? Remind you of? Feel? Please add your reflection. Maybe you could take a crack at wriiting your own poem?
Ms W
PS: Anjli- that is not a comment sandwich- don't forget -positive-suggestion or question-positive.